Friday, December 5, 2008

..being in Love




Finally sagle problems sample hote. Sulekha la tichya krutyanchi shiksha milali hoti. She had died a death which wouldn't be forgotten so easily by anyone. Abhimaan suddha bara zala hota. Pan Sulekhachya antabarobar mi Vikrant la bhetnyachi sagli kaarane dekhil sampli hoti. Case sambandhi bolaychay; sulekha, manisha baddal mahiti havi ahe; abhimaan kasa ahe; Bal kaka chya khoonyabadal kahi kalla ka....saglyanch prashnanchi uttara milali hoti. Tasa mhanal tar everything had returned to normal. Pan tarihi khup aswastha hote. Finally thodishi dhadas keli ani tharavla ki ata sagla sangun taknar....ajun thambvat pan navhta mhana!!! Ajobanchi pan hich iccha hoti. Tyanna phone kela ani ratri beach var bhetaycha tharla.

Aaj agdi tharlelya velechya 10 min adhi jaun ubhi hote mi. Ale te velevar, nehmich velet astat mhana :) Aaj khup chan disat hote, ka te vicharu naka. White shirt, black jeans [ ho mahiti ahe nothing so very sexy about a pair of jeans n a plain shirt pan tyancha sadhepana hi mala faar avadtao] Fakta saadhepanach nahi!! Saral ahet te, ugach faar mothmothya gappa marat nahit, apan bara apla kaam bara, tyancha prem te krutitun dakhavtat, maza balishpane, agaupana agdi sahaj visarun mala maafahi kartat. "Priya!" [ my heart certainly skips a beat when he calls my name]

Aaj tharvun alele ki sagla sangnar manatla tyanna. Pan ata te samor aalyavar kharach kahi suchat navhta.

V: phone karun bolavun ghetlas. Kahi kaam hota ka Priya

P: umm ho. Mhanje nahi, mhanje tasa kaam asa kahi nahi. Bolavasa vatla bas!!

V: aga mag bol na. 10 min apan nustya ferya martoy beach var. Aaj double duty lagleli. Kharach khup thakloy.

P: OK. mag jau de. Aaj nako. Apan udya boluya.

Mazya chehryavarchi disappointment bahutek tyanna disli asavi. Mi pudhe janar itkyat tyanni maza haath dharla. Mi thamble. It felt as if time had stopped. Mi valun tyanchyakade baghitla. Anek prashna hote tyanchya chehryavar. Ani hyaveli saglya prashnanchi uttara hoti mazyakade. Mala padlele sagle prashna mi sodvun alele.

V: Priya, kay zala. Kahi sangaycha ahe ka

Te nehmich mazya manatla olkhu shakatat. Aaj je sangaychay te ka nahi olkhun ghet!! Mi kasa sangu, kay bolu kahich suchat nahiye. Ani asa haath dharun thevla maza tar kahi faarsa suchnyache chances suddha nahiyet. Te samjun ka nahi ghet!!

V: aaj chan diste ahes Priya. Rojchya peksha thodi vegli vatate ahes. Anything special.

P: ho! [ na vichar karta patkan nighunach gela tondatun]

V: kay?

Vikrant hastahet ka? Hyat hasnyasarkha kay ahe.

Je hichya chehryavar mala saaf distay te hi bolun kadhi dakhvel mala. Ka mich bolun taaku mazya manatla? Pan nako. Punha ekda to apmaan nako. Ata turn tichi ahe. Tila pudhakar gheu de.

P: Vikrant aaj tumhi pan chan distay...

She is really trying my patience now

V: OK Priya. Ata jyasathi bolavlela te bolshil ka?

P: umm Vikrant. Mi ...mi tumchyashi khup vait vagle Vikrant. Tumchyavar vishwaas nahi thevla. Tumhala khup kahi bara vait bolle. Pan ata mala mazya chukichi jaaniv hot ahe. Mala maaf karal Vikrant?

Hila he itkach bolaycha hota ka??!!

V: tu je vaglis te apekshit hota Priya. Mi tuzyavar kadhich chidlo navhto. Ani chidin tari kasa, kiti hi zala tari.....

P: kitihi zala tari kay...kay??

V: kahi nahi. Jau de. Khup ushir zalay Priya. Nighaycha ka?

P: nahi!! Mala tumhala kahitari sangaychay. Baba..umm..te mazyasathi sthala baghtahet.

Achanak hrudayat dhassa zala. Priyacha lagna....dusrya konashitari !!!

V: bara, kon ahe mag to. Who is the lucky chap?!!

Maza dokach firla. Itkya shantpane kasa bolu shaktat Vikrant. Tyanna kasa kalat nahiye ki mi tyanchyashivay ata dusryakonacha vichar suddha karu shakat nahi. Asech dokyat vichar suru astana mi putputle : i wish it were you vikrant!! Ajun koni nako mala!!

Mi je aikla te kharach bolli ka Priya?? Or was it just wishful thinking on my part!!

V: kay bollis Priya.

I tried to turn back so that I need not face him. Pan mi visarlele ki maza haath ajunahi tyanchya haatach hota. He stopped me from turning my back towards him & clutched me by my arms & drew me closer. If holding hands with him had been bad, this was worst. This close I couldn't even think straight, let alone speak.

Kadhi navhe ti hi badbadi bahuli aaj shanta hoti. Pan ata tila bolaychi kahi garaj urlich navhti. Ani ata mala hi tila vicharychi garaj navhti. Ti je kahi putputli te tichya najret mala disat hoto. Kadhi navhe ti aaj Priya chakka lajat hoti. My heart missed several beats. Mazi Priyala lajta hi yeta he aajach kalla mala!!

It was full moon today. The sky was lit up with millions of stars. The sea was sparkling in their light. It felt as if we had been captured in a moment of time. The moon was serving as our spot light, lighting up the spot where we stood. Everything seemed magical. We were lost in each other, completely in love. It felt like we were at the beginning of time with no one to disturb us. I was lost in his embrace. A soft romantic number was being played somewhere...maybe at one of the tea stalls or maybe it were our hearts singing afterall!! Our feet moved of their own volition.

Had I lost it? Was I actually dancing? And that too where someone could spot us easily. And where was that music coming from? But it seemed that my heart had a taken a will of its own. Life all of a sudden felt complete. It felt that this was the moment I had always longed for. The feeling of being in love, being loved equally in return. For the first time in my life I was looking forward to the future. I was at peace. Here was the girl, the only girl I had ever loved with all my heart, she was here with me & she loved me as much as I did her. Life just couldn't have been more perfect!!

22 comments:

shreya said...

That was very romantic!!!it reminds me my love. The beach, The moon, music.....Hayeeee. I wish to see this scene in realty n i hope shruti can direct it!!!!

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anu said...

hey shruti.. i m completely speechless!!..kharach mala kahich suchat nahiye...u r simply great shruti!!asa scene kharach hava yar asambhav madhe..its really very very romantic scene.konalahi avadel hi ideal datea..ashic asavi date asa pan vatel[:d]..tu je kahi lihila ahes te best ahe..mi punha,navyane vikrant chya premat padle shruti..aani priya pan jast avadayla lagli..aani shruti fakta tuzyachmule!!!vikrant-priya n shruti u alos rocks!!!!!thanx a lot shruti..thank u so much

niharika said...

kay bhannat ahe...besht...
tooo romantic...he asach vhayla hava...me dole mitun atta te sagla baghtiye...and vikrant does look very sexy even in jeans n white shirt!!!...chabook..bai...chhatit dhadadhadavlas.... :X.... :)...

Colette said...

This is the best romantic piece written ever..Its just so very romantic and completely true. I agree that eyes definitely speak more than words and I believe that the love of your life must be able to understand what u feel or want just by looking into your eyes...The lovely walk on the beach with with your love and that too in the presence of the moonlight, with songs playing in the background,is simply amazing and truly romantic...I seriously wish I and my boyfriend could also experience such things...But on the whole a beautiful piece of work written by you.. Continue the good work.. Its amazing. I truly loved it..Keep writing always..Its just awesome...U rock...I don't have more words to say...

priyanka said...

how pure......!

Ruchi said...

Tu hya post var comment expect karu tari kashi shaktes? he vaachlyavar kahi suchat pan nahi....! i mean... i mean... it was like.... kay lihu.... ajibaat suchat nahiye.... shruti... kaash... kaash ha scene actual madhe asta... tar mi tar full flat zale aste... bhariii... jabardasta...!!!!!

sharyu said...

shruti...darroj vachla tari bore nahi honar asa scene ahe..gr8 yaar...asa scene kharach asel tar kiti majja na...dialogues hi masst ahet..pan mala yatla saglyat avadlela dialogue mhanje 'bara, kon ahe mag to. Who is the lucky chap?!!'...kharach asach bolel vikrant....u r simply gr8888888...and thank u 4 this wondrful scene.

Tinkerbell said...

All I can say is a great romance novelist is born .. This just made me time travel to college days when life was ohh all soo dreamy more like living in the book than out if it like now ...So thanks for this experiece of a wonderful journey you presented us with ...

Gauri said...

Hi Shruti,
ultimate romantic scene aahe yaar. I wish ha scene apalyala screen war baghayala milala aasata.sahee watala aasata.
me kititari wela wachala ha scene......tarihi parat parat wachawasa watat...ekdum todlas maitrini!!!

shubada said...

Wat to write??? Shruti, u med me SPEECHLESS…
aga tuza blog vachun tar angavar kata aala…. Dolyat paani aala.. m very much Satisfied…
d feelings u described.. Soo Pure.. So nice… Sahiiii lihila…
Viky la itkaa Romantic pahun, mi tar ajunach tyacha premat padle..!!
& Shruti u hav written D best possible end… PERFECT end, for a PERFECT story…
kip it up..

sonali said...

hey shruti...
it's very romantic..awosome......i m speechless after reading it.kash this scene was in actual......no words to say.....keep it up.

Swarada said...

i wish ha scene asambhav madhe hoil...ani to tu direct karshil....
U will b a great director & script -writer...

bugs chitnis said...

shruti...to be truthful, i read romantic novels minimally, but this seemed just....wow....exaggerate karat nahi...pan dolyat pani ala vachun...kasla romantic scene lihilays...simply AMAZING!!!

reema said...

HEY SHRUTI KHARCHA GR888 AATA PARYANT KASE TARI KARUN SAMZALWLE HOTE KE KADACHIT SIR YAYACH ENAHI PARAT PAN HEY WACHUN MAZI ANKHI PRABAL ICCHA ZALIY KE sr NE PARAT YAWE AN HEY AAPN SRV JYA KSHNACHI WAAT PAHAT AAHOT JO TU ITKYA SUNDAR PANE RACHLA AAHES TO KSHN BHGHAYLA PAN BHETAWA KHARACH AATA SUDDHA VACHUNCH AKSHRSH: DOLYATUN PANI AALE AMZINGLY put !!!!
THANKZZ A LOT BUDDY !!!

reema said...

m sry pan mee wisarle hot eek gosht vicharayla tu ha blog sirna sangitalas wachayla tyani wachla ka mala nakki mahit nahiye mhanun wicharle .....

gauri said...

hi shruti like every1 sed am speechless
i hope this happens in asambhav
endla kharech ase zale tar khooop maja yeil
wishful thinking i guess
once again khrach khooop chhan lihila aahes vikrant-priyaha scene

priyanka said...

khup mast lihala aahe.hey vachtana aayushyaat ghadlelya kahi ghatana doolyasamorun gelya.khupach sunder.nakalatpane dolyaat pani aani oothanvar hasu aale.aata ha scene lavkarat lavkar reality pan baghycha aahe.

meera said...

It's simply beautifula nd romantic....
But it hurts me that this scene wont come on real Asmabhav as SR is not going to come back to Asambhhav..... it really hurts me lots.... it will hurt even more after reading this scene....

mamata said...

Shruti.....gr88 scene....all the emotions touched me....this is one of my fav love stories....so thnx a lot...ton 4 such a nice scene.

aps or appum or appy said...

shruti.....wonderful!!!! u r gr8!!

ulhas said...

सर्वांच्या जे मनात होत पण दुर्दैवाने प्रत्यक्षात
घडू शकल नाही, ते श्रुतीने या लेखाद्वारे अगदी
जिवंतपणे उभ केलय.
धन्यवाद श्रुती !

God bless you.